Contents Page Final Cut

This is the contents page from my final cut. Again I have kept features from my contents page rough cut and made improvements that were suggested in my feedback and that of my own ideas. I have kept the same header to the contents page as this was mentioned a few times in my positive feedback. I also kept the left panel in which I had positioned the page numbers and descriptions for all the articles in the magazine. Another feature I kept was the reviews section at the bottom of the left panel. I think this adds variation from the standard page numbering above and helps it to stand out. For the editorial section under road crew I have minimised it so only the important names are showing. I agreed with my feedback that it took up too much space and wasn't very interesting to read. I have left most of the page blank to allow an image dominated style, which is conventional of rap magazines. I have used the photo that was originally on my front cover, keeping the same effect of the artists head over the header. I have also made it appear that he is slightly stood behind the left panel which creates an interesting 3D effect. I kept the background white to allow the colour scheme of the image to be the same of the contents page colour scheme. This keeps the house style consistent and looks appealing to the reader. Finally I have changed the fonts and language to fit that of the hip hop genre. This keeps the magazine conventional and directly targets my audience.