Teacher Feedback: Double Page Spread

Positive
- Strong layout.
- Good mix of font and colour.

Negative
- Not enough overall text.
- Opening paragraph too chunky.
- Photo doesn't really achieve much - look for examples.
- Not sure on colour scheme (green).
- Needs 3 columns in the article.
- Perhaps change the central colour green.
- The page is uneven, it needs to be half and half.

This time I have received a huge amount of negatives for my double page spread and not so many positives. The positives were the same as usual, a strong layout and good mix of font and colour. The good thing about getting a lot of negatives is I now know a lot of ways on how to improve. I need to work on my article, making sure it covers 3 columns of a consistent size. I will look back at my research to find out what a rap magazine talks about in their article so I can work on extending mine. Again I need to find a photo that looks more conventional and ambitious, however I will use it to also help my fonts. I have put a lot of work into the green font choice so I will look to create a photo with similar coloring in order to help it fit my design.